Question

8．In recent years many flowers shops have been appeared in our small town．It is common for people to buy flowers when they go to a gathering，visiting a sick friend，or attend a wedding．I still remember clear one day last year when Tom，disabled student，presented some flowers to his mother to express his gratitude to her．He owes his entire life to his mother's kind and care．With her he would not have had the confidence or the courage to fight her disability．As a result of the great effort what he had made，he was finally admitted to a key university．

Answer 1

分析 作者在文中讲述了近几年送花已经成为一种流行的趋势．作者曾记得一位残疾学生在花店买了些花送给妈妈表示对妈妈的衷心谢意．这位残疾学生就是在妈妈的鼓励下取得自信和战胜病魔的勇气，最后考入大学．

解答 In recent years many flowersshops have been appeared in our small town．It is common for people to buy flowers when they go to a gathering，visiting a sick friend，or attend a wedding．I still remember clear one day last year when Tom，∧disabled student，presented some flowers to his mother to express his gratitude to her．He owes his entire life to his mother's kind and care．With her he would not have had the confidence or the courage to fight her disability．As a result of the great effort what he had made，he was finally admitted to a key university．
详解：
1．flowers改为 flower； 考查名词作定语，名词作定语时要用单数形式． 
2．去掉been；考查动词的语态，appear是不及物动词，没有被盗语态，故把been去掉．       
3．visiting改为visit；考查并列成分，句子里的buy，visit 和 attend 是并列结构，形式保持一致，所以 visiting改为visit． 
4．clear改为clearly；考查副词，这里用副词做状语，修饰动词remember．
5．disabled student前面加a；考查冠词，student是可数名词，前面加不定冠词a泛指"一个"．
6．owe改为owed；考查动词的时态，结合上下文语境，此处讲的是过去发生的事情，故用一般过去时．
7．kind改为kindness；考查名词，名词所有格后面要跟名词，kind是形容词，名词形式为kindness．  
8．With改为Without；考查句意；分析句意应为"没有她，她就没有雨残疾做斗争的信息"，故此处应该用否定形式 Without．   
9．her改为his；考查物主代词，这里应该指前面提到的  disabled student's，故用his．
10．what改为that或去掉what；考查定语从句，he had made是一个定语从句，修饰前面的the great effort，所以用关系代词that，或去掉what．

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