Question

17．2014青岛世界园艺博览会 （International Horticultural Exposition 2014Qingdao） 于4月25日至10月25日在青岛举行．组委会面向社会招聘涉外志愿者．假如你是李华，想在暑假期间做志愿者，请你用英语写一封应聘信．内容包括：应聘的原因、你的优势，以及如何做好志愿者等等．
注意：1．词数：120-150；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．信的开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
Dear Sir，
      
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：
For one thing（1），I am familiar with（2）Qingdao，which （3）can be helpful in the role as a volunteer．首先，我熟悉青岛，这对担任志愿者有帮助．
（1）for one thing首先；往往与for another连用列举原因，表示"首先…再则…"．
（2）be familiar with对…熟悉．
（3）which引导了非限制性定语从句，指代整个主句，使文章显得简练．
句型二：
It is necessary that its volunteers be familiar with the culture and history of Qingdao．志愿者有必要熟悉青岛的历史和文化．
It is necessary that…表示"有必要…"，从句中的动词要求用虚拟语气的形式"（should）+do"．
句型三：
I would appreciate it if（1）I could be given the chance to challenge myself（2）．如果我能够得到这样的挑战自我的机会我将非常感激．
（1）I would appreciate it if…表示"如果…将非常感激"，是表示请求的客套语，其中it是形式宾语．
（2）challenge oneself挑战自我

解答 Dear sir，
My name is Li Hua，a high school student（自我介绍）．I'm writing to apply for a position as a volunteer for the International Horticultural Exposition 2014 Qingdao．（写信的目的）I consider it a great opportunity to improve myself and helpful to the success of the great event （应聘的原因）．
I am completely qualified for the position．For one thing，I am familiar with Qingdao，which can be helpful in the role as a volunteer【高分句型一】．For another，I have a gift for communicating with others； and my spoken English is so excellent that I have no difficulty communicating with English-speaking foreigners（我的优势）．
To be a good volunteer，we are supposed to be polite and patient．Since the IHE is held in Qingdao，it is necessary that its volunteers be familiar with the culture and history of Qingdao【高分句型二】．
I would appreciate it if I could be given the chance to challenge myself【高分句型三】．Best wishes to you（表达希望和祝愿）．
 
Yours
Li Hua

点评 写作时首先审题要到位：审体裁、人称和时态；审要点，不能有要点的遗漏．其次要考虑高级词语和句型的选用；再次，运用关联词如besides、what's  more、moreover、for one thing …for another等，使文字更加流畅．