Question

今年十月黄金周旅游异常火爆，由此也引起了人们的大量讨论。前不久，相关部门针对黄金周的去留问题，在网上征集意见。下面是一个对10，000个网民所作的调查。请你把调查的结果用英语写成短文，并谈谈自己的看法（不得少于两点），发表在学校的报刊上。

观点	原因
赞成长假期（45%）	假期集中，方便出外旅游，尽情放松；更多时间与家人一起。
取消长假期（55%）	容易造成交通阻塞，甚至交通事故；人流量大，对景点保护不利；各项服务质量下降。

 

注意：1.对所给要点，不要简单翻译，要有适当发挥；

2.字数120左右。短文中开头已写好，不计入词数。

3.参考词汇：网民—Netizen   

Not long ago, opinions were collected on line about whether “Golden Week” should be kept or adjusted.                                                

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Not long ago, opinions were collected on line about whether “Golden Week” should be kept or adjusted. Ten thousand Netizens took part in this investigation. Here are the results.

45% of the surveyed people hope to keep “Golden Week”. They think a long holiday not only provides them with adequate time for a trip but also they can relax themselves completely. What’s more, with a long holiday, they have more fun staying with the family.

However, 55% of the people think “Golden Week” should be canceled. They indicate that during the long holiday, there are more traffic jams and even traffic accidents. In addition, the crowded people gathering in some famous places has caused damage to the relics and led to poor service quality.

In my opinion, …

【解析】

试题分析：本为属于考生很熟悉的正反观点类的议论文，要点基本上都给了出来，考生只需要把要点翻译成英文即可，难度在于选择合适的词汇和句型表达出所需要的语义。在写作的时候要选择自己能够运用的句型灵活表达，不要总是使用陈述句，可以变换着使用倒装句，强调句等让文章充满变化。

考点：考查正反观点的议论文

点评：本文属于正反观点的议论文，话题与学生的生活息息相关，考生有话可说。难度在于表达的准确性和合理性。要运用合适的连接词如worse still , after all等把要点连接成段落，让文章成为一个整体。