Question

3．Directions：Write an English composition according to the instructions given below．
请以下列词语为关键词写一篇英语短文．

match      winner    loser              result

内容：（1）自己或他人的一次经历；
     （2）你的感受．
注意：（1）必须使用所给4个关键词；
     （2）词数不少于120个；
     （3）不能使用真实姓名和学校名称．

Answer 1

分析 本文为开放式作文，根据所给关键词和提示内容，要求考生运用生活中的事例来解释说明，属于提纲作文．在写作时应使用第一人称，时态主要为一般过去时为主．重要短语：be lost in thought（陷入沉思），put all our efforts to do…..（努力去做），desired to do （渴望去做），belonged to （属于），claim （声称，宣称），focus on（集中在…..），sb be convinced that（与…..相处融洽）．

解答 In my life，there is an experience making me lost in thought．Last month，I，together with my teammates，had a basketball match against another basketball team，hoping to win the match and earning great honor for our team．【高分句型】Having put all our efforts to practice playing basketball whenever we had time，we were strongly desired to be the winner．【高分句型】However，not until the match was over did we realize that we became the loser at all．【高分句型】All of us felt disappointed，believing that honor never belonged to us．It was our coach's words that educated us a lot．He claimed that instead of being focused on the result，we should focus more on the process and correct our mistakes，which would help improve us more in the future．（经历）
From this experience，I am convinced that a result is not everything．Only by focusing more on correcting our mistakes can we better ourselves in the future．（感受）

点评 提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点和关键词．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．