Question

14．假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Jim想了解你家乡文化遗产（heritage）保护的情况．请你就文化遗产的保护现状、存在的问题及你的希望给他写一封信．
注意：1．词数：100左右：
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
Dear Jim，
How are things going？I'm glad you are interested in our cultural heritage protection．
Great progress has been made in the past few years．Every year a lot of efforts are made and much money is spent researching and protecting it．（高分句型一） People are more aware of the importance of protecting the cultural heritage．（高分句型二）
However，we are faced with greaterchallenges in protecting our culturalrlics nowadays because they have to make way for many new buildings．Even worse，a largenumber of historic spots have already been destroyed，which worries us a lot．（高分句型三）
I think more steps should be taken to protect our cultural heritage．And I hopethe whole society will take an active part．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于开放类作文，根据提示信息你的美国朋友Jim想了解你家乡文化遗产（heritage）保护的情况．请你就文化遗产的保护现状、存在的问题及你的希望给他写一封信，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息2、要在适当的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：be interested in 对…感兴趣；make progress取得进步；cultural heritage文化遗产；however然而；even worse更糟的是；take an active part积极参加
Every year a lot of efforts are made and much money is spent researching and protecting it．（高分句型一）
People are more aware of the importance of protecting the cultural heritage．（高分句型二）
Even worse，a large number of historic spots have already been destroyed，which worries us a lot．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Jim，
        How are things going？I'm glad you are interested in our cultural heritage protection．
        Great progress has been made in the past few years．Every year a lot of efforts are made and much money is spent researching and protecting it．（高分句型一） People are more aware of the importance of protecting the cultural heritage．（高分句型二）
        However，we are faced with greater challenges in protecting our cultural rlics nowadays because they have to make way for many new buildings．Even worse，a large number of historic spots have already been destroyed，which worries us a lot．（高分句型三）
        I think more steps should be taken to protect our cultural heritage．And I hope the whole society will take an active part．
                                                                                                                                                                              Yours sincerely，
                                                                                                                                                                                     Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．