Question

书面表达 （满分25分）
进入高中三个月以来，你逐渐适应了新的学习生活。你收到初中同学张磊的邮件，信中他向你诉说了在高中学习和生活中遇到的困难。请你写封回信，帮助他分析存在的问题并给出建议，最后附上真诚的祝福。

遇到的困难	解决的方法
功课多，作业难	向老师求助，改进学习方式
朋友少，感到孤独	主动结交朋友，积极参加活动
你的感受和体会

注意: 1. 词数100-120。
首句已给出（不计词数）。
Dear Zhang Lei,
I’m glad to receive your letter. You told me that you are having trouble in life in senior school.
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Answer 1

Dear Zhang Lei,
I’m glad to receive your letter. You told me that you are having trouble in life in senior school. So I decide to write to you in order to offer my guidance on your learning and living problems.
In your letter, you have mentioned that you have too much homework to do and it is too difficult for you. In my opinion, you may turn to your teachers and make some changes in your learning style. That way, you can not only get along well with your teachers, but also play an important role in your own study.
In terms of friendship, you said you have suffered from loneliness because you have few friends. I think it is very normal when you just have spent three months in your new school and new class. It would be a good idea if you join in some school activities actively and try your best to make more friends. By doing this, you will find there are many lovely fiends around you and you will be more outgoing and easy-going.
I hope you will find my advice useful
Yours sincerely
XXX

试题分析：考查提纲式作文：这是提纲式作文，要点已经给出，而且很详细，考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示，根据所给要点，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
【亮点说明】这篇范文要点全面使用了不少高级词汇和句型：turn to 求助于，In my opinion,在我看来， get along well with和…相处好， play an important role 起着重要的作用，not only …but also…不但…而且，In terms of 就…而言，suffer from遭受， So I decide to write to you in order to offer my guidance on your learning and living problems.这句话用了目的状语， you have mentioned that you have too much homework to do and it is too difficult for you. 这句话用了it做形式主语和宾语从句， I think it is very normal when you just have spent three months in your new school and new class. It would be a good idea if you join in some school activities actively and try your best to make more friends. 这两句话都用了it做形式主语。