Question

【题目】假定你是某国际学校的学生李华。最近，你校打算为同学们制作统一的校服，请你给外籍校长威尔逊先生写一封建议信，要点如下：

1. 写信的目的：

2. 对校服布料、款式等提出建议并说明理由。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3 开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。

Dear Mr. Wilson,

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Mr. Wilson,

I am writing to make some suggestions on our new uniform.

Our uniform is worn nearly every day, so it would be great if you could understand what students like. First of all, I’d prefer it to be made cotton because cotton feels soft and is good for our skin. Second, I’m tired of seeing the same clothes everywhere at school, so please let boys and girls have different uniforms. Third, I suggest that you provide four or five styles for us to choose from. All students can vote and choose their favorite styles.

I’d be honored if you could take my suggestions into consideration.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本文是提纲类写作，要点已给出，写作时要结合自身对校服的看法，表达出对校服的要求。成文时要注意：1.文章主要用第一人称；2.时态：一般现在时为主；3.文章的内容要点要齐全：（1）写信的目的；（2）对校服布料、款式等提出建议并说明理由。4.注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，以提高文章的档次；5.注意使用一些连接词，使得文章表达自然、流畅。6.注意文章的字数控制，120单词左右。7.不能使用原文语句。

亮点说明：本文是一篇英文书信。书信格式正确，要点齐全，层次分明，布局合理，运用高级句子。Our uniform is worn nearly every day, so it would be great if you could understand what students like.被动语态、并列句和宾语从句完美结合；I’d prefer it to be made cotton because cotton feels soft and is good for our skin.句中使用原因状语从句；Third, I suggest that you provide four or five styles for us to choose from. All students can vote and choose their favorite styles.suggest后面用含虚拟语气的宾语从句（should）+动词原形；I’d be honored if you could take my suggestions into consideration.被动语态和if引导的条件状语从句出现在句中；另外，First of all, Second, Third,为文章增色添彩。