Question

假段定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

The day before yesterday, I went to the bookstore where is near our school to buy a reference book. It was Saturday, so there was many people. Under the help of the shop assistants, I quickly got the book I needed. I was about to leave when I found someone trying to steal a man’s money. Although I was nervous, but I tried to think of a way to help. Suddenly, a good idea came me. I stepped on the man’s foot on purposes. As I expected, the man’s scream gives the thief a fright, whom quickly walked out of the shop. After hear my explanation, the man smiled and showed great gratitude to him.

Answer 1

1.where--which

2.was--were

3.Under--With

4.去掉but

5.came∧to

6.purposes--purpose

7.gives-gave

8.whom--who

9.hear--hearing

10.him--me

【解析】

试题分析：题目主要考查学生对代词、固定短语、时态、定语从句、there be句型等知识的掌握情况。时态、定语从句等是短文改错题常考的知识点。

1.

2. be句型。there be句型中be的单复数要根据后面的名词来定，many people表示复数含义，谓语也用复数，故把was改为were。

3. the help of sb在某人的帮助之下，故把Under改为With。

4. still连用，故去掉but。

5. to苏醒，达成，共计，突然想起，故在came后加to。

6. purpose故意地，是固定短语，故把purposes改为purpose。

7.考查时态。根据“The day before yesterday”可知，短文叙述的是过去的事情，应该用一般过去时，故把gives改为gave。

8.考查非限制性定语从句。句中有逗号，是非限制性定语从句，从句缺少主语，且指人，whom作宾语，故把whom改为who。

9.考查固定搭配。after在此是介词，后跟动名词，相当于after I heard...，故把hear改为hearing。

10.

考点：考查代词；固定短语；时态；定语从句；there be句型