Question

读写任务 (共1小题，满分25分)阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

Drunk driving, a major concern currently, is not a funny thing, which has killed many people and ruined the lives of many others. At present, traffic accidents become "the world's first harm".

Two months ago, after drinking a lot of alcohol, my friend's uncle drove the car home. He was heavily drunk, but he still drove home by himself. On the road near his home, an old lady was going across the road, but his uncle didn't notice her and he was still moving on under the influence of alcohol. And the old lady didn't see his uncle, either. In the end, the lady died. Later, a blood test showed the alcohol in every 100 cc of his uncle's blood had reached 175.7 mg, indicating he was seriously drunk.

Had it not been for his uncle's drunkenness, the terrible accident would not have happened. If the lady hadn't died, she would live a happy life with her daughters and sons. And his uncle's home was also destroyed by his uncle. Therefore, two families were destroyed.

I wish more people could realize the seriousness of drunk driving and obey the traffic regulations faithfully. Always remember: refuse to drink and drive, and give a safe world to you and me!

【写作内容】

1. 以约30词概括上文的主要内容；

2. 用约120个词结合“醉驾”就交通安全进行讨论，内容包括：

（1）造成交通事故的主要原因；

（2）通过具体事例说明交通事故的危害；

（3）如何减少交通事故。

【写作要求】

1、作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。

2、作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

【评分标准】

概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。

Answer 1

Having drunk heavily, the writer's friend's uncle killed an old lady in an accident, which ruined two families. Thus, the writer appeals to people to attach importance to the seriousness of drunk driving and honestly follow the traffic rules.

Nowadays, many people lose their lives due to traffic accidents, which are caused by a lot of factors. Most of them are closely related to the fact that people are lacking in awareness of safety. Thus, we can see many cases such as pedestrians' crossing the road ignoring the red light and the drivers' drunk or fatigue driving.

Traffic accidents severely impact people's life. A similar experience my cousin went through a year ago can illustrate the seriousness. One evening, at a classmate reunion, he drank a lot, turning a deaf ear to others' advice. On the way home his car hit a little girl and injured her seriously. So far he is still living a life of regrets. Therefore, from my cousin's case we can see that in an accident both the offender and the victim suffer a lot from it.

As for the frequent accidents on the road, some more activities should be launched to improve people's awareness of traffic safety. In addition, more severe traffic rules and regulations should be established to fine the offenders, I think. Only in this way can traffic accidents be reduced and road safety strengthened.

【解析】这是一篇议论文写作，主要围绕醉驾展开，题目已大致给定范围，主要内容包括文章提要，醉驾原因危害及措施，考生写作时要注意文章的条理性。文章第一句Having drunk heavily, the writer's friend's uncle killed an old lady in an accident, which ruined two families.接连使用了两个特殊句式，Having drunk heavily是原因状语从句的省略，which ruined two families.是which领导的非限制性定语从句；第二段第一句Nowadays, many people lose their lives due to traffic accidents, which are caused by a lot of factors.使用了which领导的非限制性定语从句；第二段第二句Most of them are closely related to the fact that people are lacking in awareness of safety.使用了that领导的定语从句；第三段第二句A similar experience my cousin went through a year ago can illustrate the seriousness.是省略了that的定语从句；文章最后一句Only in this way can traffic accidents be reduced and road safety strengthened.使用了一个倒装句收束全文。在短语运用上，使用了due to由于，be related to有关，be lacking in缺乏，go through经历，turn a deaf ear to不听，as for由于，In addition此外，等诸多好短语使得文章如行云流水。在词语运用上，使用了Thus，Therefore，Nowadays等单词独立成句来起到衔接文章作用，使得文章新意连连。总结：议论文写作时重点在于把握文章的条理，要由浅入深说明道理，才会使得文章显得有层次。

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