Question

在一次课堂讨论中，大家对朋友和友谊进行了讨论。请根据下表内容，用英语写一篇短文，并谈谈你对友谊的看法。

为什么需要朋友	1、 有许多问题靠自己无法解决，要靠朋友帮助； 2、可与朋友分享快乐、分担忧愁,，少受寂寞。
什么是真正的朋友和友谊	1、敬重你而你也敬重的人； 2、在你需要他的时候绝不离开你； 3、牺牲自己的利益，给你真诚和无私的帮助； 4、鼓励你坚持正确的东西，少犯些错误。
你对友谊的看法	（自由发挥）

 注意：1、短文必须包括所有要点；
2、词数150左右；
3、短文开头已写好，不计入总词数。
In life we can hardly do without friends.__________________________________
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Answer 1

In life we can hardly do without friends. There are many difficulties and problems we can’t overcome with only our own efforts. Besides, we need friends to share our joys and sorrows, otherwise we will feel lonely.
What is true friendship? A good friend is someone who respects you and who you respect. As the saying goes, “A friend in need is a friend indeed.” True friends are those who never desert you when you are in need. On the contrary, they will offer you sincere and selfless help even at the cost of their own interests. Moreover, they will encourage you to stick to what is right and tell us not to do what is wrong or illegal.
In my opinion, true friendship is largely based on supporting each other. Whenever we have problems, we never hesitate to offer support to each other. Besides, we are supposed to help and trust each other. In conclusion, true friendship will stand the test of time.

试题分析：试题讨论的话题是有关朋友和友谊的，贴近考生实际生活。容易入题。给出的要点比较详细，前面两大部分内容只需依据提纲的内容翻译出来即可。文章主要围绕“为什么需要朋友，什么是真正的朋友和友谊，你对友谊的看法”三部分展开，其中“你对友谊的看法”要求给出自己的观点，属于半开放性话题,故需要自由发挥的地方较多.需要注意不要偏离文章中心.
点评：在写作时注意把握好以下几点：动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。尤其是“你对友谊的看法”部分要求给出自己的观点，要注意不要偏离文章中心。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。