Question

假定你是李华，你的英国好友Mary考试失败，对自己失去了信心，产生了厌学情绪。请你给他发一封邮件开导他，要点如下：

不要过于伤心

放松，减少焦虑心理

和老师交流有助于提高成绩

探索（explore）适合自己的有效学习方法

注意：1. 词数：100左右；

可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Answer 1

Dear Mary,

I am sorry to hear that you failed the exams and have lost interest in schoolwork.

In my opinion, grades are not the only purpose of learning, so don’t feel too bad. At this moment, you should take it easy and find ways to reduce your anxiety. Why not go on an outing with your friends or find time to listen to your favorite music? If you can talk to the teachers that you respect most, they may give you some practical advice that help you to explore a new learning method which is better and more suitable for you.

Anyway, I hope you can rebuild your self-confidence soon!

Yours truly

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇话题类作文。假定你是李华，你的英国好友Mary考试失败，对自己失去了信心，产生了厌学情绪。请你给他发一封邮件开导他，要点如下：不要过于伤心;放松，减少焦虑心理;和老师交流有助于提高成绩;探索（explore）适合自己的有效学习方法。需要写的内容已经粗略给出，需要我们翻译成完整通顺的句子，适当添加些内容，使文章更充实。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。一定要给出自己的看法。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型为文章润色。注意要求的词数100词左右，不要太多也不要太少。

【亮点说明】I am sorry to hear that you failed the exams and have lost interest in schoolwork.

这里含有一个宾语从句；If you can talk to the teachers that you respect most, they may give you some practical advice that help you to explore a new learning method which is better and more suitable for you.这里含有一个定语从句。

考点：话题类书面表达