Question

【题目】假如你是 Li Ming，是阳光中学高三的学生。你们学校这学期搬到了新校区，周围有很多化工厂。每天都能闻到化工厂的刺鼻的味道。这给全校师生带来很大的影响.请你给市长写封信，反映学校周围的空气污染问题，并提出建议。

要求：

1. 词数： 120 左右；

2. 内容充实，语言连贯通顺;

3. 开头结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。

Mr. Mayor，

I am a senior 3 student in Sunshine Middle School.

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We are looking forward to your answer.

Yours，

Li Ming

Answer 1

【答案】

Mr. Mayor，

I am a senior 3 student in Sunshine Middle School. This term our school moved to the new campus, around which are many chemical plants. The terrible smell from the factories can be smelled everywhere in our school, especially in the morning.

Our life has been badly affected. Our teachers all feel there is something wrong with their throats so that they can’t make themselves heard in class. Besides, most of the students feel so uncomfortable that they can’t concentrate on their studies. What matters most is that the poisonous smell will have a bad effect on our health in the long run.

Given the severe situation, we strongly request the government take immediate action to stop the air pollution. We suggest the factories near our school be closed down.

We are looking forward to your answer.

Yours，

Li Ming

【解析】

试题分析：本题要求就校园周围空气污染问题给市长写信，反映情况，提出建议，第一段介绍情况，第二段阐明空气污染给师生带来的危害，第三段提出建议。注意使用适当的短语和句型，让文章有档次。

【亮点】

本文较好完成了题目规定的任务，要点齐全、层次清楚、行文连贯。用词不落俗套。如用Given the severe situation,鉴于这种严峻的形势，close down关闭，句式体现多样化：如定语从句This term our school moved to the new campus, around which are many chemical plants. so that句型：Our teachers all felt there is something wrong with their throats so that they can’t make themselves heard in class.名词性从句：What matters most is that the poisonous smell will have a bad effect on our health in the long run.虚拟语气：We suggest the factories near our school be closed down.体现了表达的多样性。