Question

14．假定你是高中生李华，上周日参加了本班组织的一次志愿者活动--去孤儿院献爱心．请你根据所给提示写一份关于此次活动的报告．
内容提示：
1．活动（赠送学习用品、教唱儿歌、拍照留念等）；
2．你的感想；
注意：
1．字数100词左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
参考词汇：孤儿orphan；     孤儿院：orphanage．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
As soon as we arrived，they gave us a warm welcome
高分句型二：
We gave the children gifts such as books and pencil boxes，which we had prepared in advance
句型一 As soon as we arrived，该句是一个由 as soon as 引导的时间状语从句，as soon as 意为：一…就…
句型二 which we had prepared in advance 该句是一个由which引导的非限制性定语从句，which在句子中充当宾语，替代前面的先行词books and pencil boxes
此外，该文章还有以下重要短语：have a visit to       make the effort to do sth

解答 Last Sunday，our class organized a meaningful voluntary activity----we had a visit to an orphanage and showed our love for orphans there．
As soon as we arrived，they gave us a warm welcome．（高分句型一）We gave the children gifts such as books and pencil boxes，which we had prepared in advance．（高分句型二）Then we patiently taught them to sing some children's songs．Before leaving，we took pictures with them to mark the activity．When it was time for us to leave，the children waved their hands and said they were grateful for our kindness．（活动简介）
We made the effort to bring sunshine to the children's life and the children's smiles confirmed that it was worthwhile to do such a job．（提出感谢）

点评 这是一篇活动报告，这类文体的作文，一般可以写成记叙文或说明文．本文根据要求，可以写成一篇记叙文的短文．要求中的"上周日"暗示此篇文章中动词的时态应该是以过去时为主．报告类的文章，叙述的语言应该力求简洁，重在陈述过程，不要加对话．如果要求部分需要加个人评论，个人感言，可以加评述性语言，本文需要利用最后一段谈个人感想．根据要求部分的内容，本文应该采用第一人称形式写作．