Question

【题目】假设你是育才中学学生李华,在网上得知美国籍中学生Tom想来中国沿古代丝绸之路游览,他向网友征集驴友兼向导。你有兴趣做他的旅伴,请给Tom写一封自荐信,内容要点如下:

1．个人情况介绍。

2．希望能想成为Tom的驴友。

注意:

1．词数100左右;

2．可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Tom,

How do you do? I've learned from your post that you want to travel along the Ancient Silk Road in China during this summer holiday and are going after a tour pal and tour guide, so I'm writing to you to recommend myself.

I'm Li Hua, a student from Yucai High School. I love traveling and always want to travel along the Silk Road. I've done a lot of research in my spare time. Therefore, I know much about all the towns, cities and. places of interest along the road, including their history, customs and culture. More importantly, I can speak English fluently.

I believe I'm the right person you're looking for. Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本文是写的是一封自荐信，Tom需要一名导游引导，来沿中国的古代丝绸之路游览，我们需要以李华的口吻介绍自己，推荐自己成为Tom的驴友。

写信时应注意下面几点：1、注意人称，应该用第一人称的形式给笔友Tom写信。2、注意时态的正确使用：本文使用一般将来时和一般现在时。3、注意恰当使用连接词如“but、and、so...”，使各个要点间逻辑连贯、行文通顺。4、适当使用一些常见的问候语如“How have you been (feeling)?你近来如何？What’s new?近况如何？”，以及高级句型和词汇以提高作文档次。内容方面应先介绍自己的情况，然后表明写信的目的，希望成为Tom的驴友。

【范文亮点】

1、文章使用了非常好的短语和句子，如“How do you do? 你好。”这是初次见面的通常用语。“Looking forward to...希望”。

2、文章采用了“Therefore、and、so、More important”等连接词，使行文更加流畅”，“ in my spare time在我的课余时间”、“looking for期望、期盼”、“know about熟悉、了解”等高频词组。

3、 I've learned from your post that you want to travel along the Ancient Silk Road in China during this summer holiday and are going after a tour pal and tour guide. that引导宾语从句。