Question

8．假设你是红星中学高三学生李华．请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，以"Go Beyond Yourself"为题，给校刊"英语角"写一篇英文稿件，记述你刻苦训练，成功通过体育测试长跑项目的过程．
注意：词数不少于60．
提示词：体育测试 Physical Fitness Test．

Last week，I successfully passed the Physical Fitness Test．
During a PE class one month ago，our teacher informed us that we would take the test on April 12^th．Upon hearing the news，I felt my heart sink，wondering how rough the way ahead would be．However，I had to face it．Every day after school，I went to the playground and practiced the 1000-meter run，which was always a nightmare for me．Each time my legs almost gave out and an inner voice lured me to give up，my teachers and classmates were always around me，comforting me and encouraging me．Their positive words and running figures pushed me forward．
Then finally came the test day．As the starting gun sounded for the race to begin，I called upon all my body's strength and speed．I ran with purpose．After enduring the long run，I approached the finish line．Quickening my steps，I was confident and hopeful．The moment I rounded the last turn，I knew I had made it．After crossing the finish line，I was so overjoyed to see my cheering classmates．I received their celebratory high-fives proudly and tears of happiness streamed down my cheeks，as my teacher shook my hand．
From this experience，I have learned that I should face my fears bravely and appreciate those who are always willing to help me，making me a better person．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇记述刻苦训练，成功通过体育测试长跑项目的过程的作文．根据题目要求可知主要用第一人称和一般过去时态．内容包括：一点明文章的主题；二描述测试前的刻苦努力；三描述测试的过程；四通过这件事获得的经验．
高分句型：
1．Upon hearing the news（doing做时间状语，hear和I之间是主动关系），I felt my heart sink，wondering（wondering做伴随状语，wonder和I之间是主动关系） how rough the way ahead would be（ how 引导宾语从句，做wondering）．
听到这个消息，我感到心里一沉，不知道前面的路有多么艰难．
2．From this experience，I have learned that （ that 引导have learned 的宾语从句）I should face my fears bravely and appreciate those who （who引导 先行词those的 定语从句，做从句的主语）are always willing to help me，making （making做结果主语）me a better person．
从这次经历我知道，我应该勇敢的面对自己的恐惧，感激那些乐于帮助我的人，这些会使我更进步．

解答 Last week，I successfully passed the Physical Fitness Test．（点明文章的主题）
       During a PE class one month ago，our teacher informed us that we would take the test on April 12^th．Upon hearing the news，I felt my heart sink，wondering how rough the way ahead would be．【高分句型一】However，I had to face it．Every day after school，I went to the playground and practiced the 1000-meter run，which was always a nightmare for me．Each time  my legs almost gave out and an inner voice lured me to give up，my teachers and classmates were always around me，comforting me and encouraging me．Their positive words and running figures pushed me forward．（描述测试前的刻苦努力）
       Then finally came the test day．As the starting gun sounded for the race to begin，I called upon all my body's strength and speed．I ran with purpose．After enduring the long run，I approached the finish line．Quickening my steps，I was confident and hopeful．The moment I rounded the last turn，I knew I had made it．After crossing the finish line，I was so overjoyed to see my cheering classmates．I received their celebratory high-fives proudly and tears of happiness streamed down my cheeks，as my teacher shook my hand．（描述测试的过程）
       From this experience，I have learned that I should face my fears bravely and appreciate those who are always willing to help me，making me a better person．【高分句型二】（通过这件事获得的经验）

点评 考查图画类作文．
写作文时，一定要切题，抓住中心，紧扣要点．不要任意发挥，画蛇添足，也不要丢三落四，要点不全．通过对众多提示或图画、图表的观察和分析，获取与写作内容有关的主要信息，并按一定的逻辑顺序排列起来，找出最密切相关的要点，列出写作提纲．