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你是李明，18岁，会拉小提琴，爱打排球，是个游泳好手。你曾在一所暑期培训班教游泳，培训女子排球队，还参加过几次学校一日游活动，其中有一次带同学们到海边学游泳。你想在暑假期间申请一份工作，在报纸上读到下面广告：
Wanted : 80 Holiday Camp Assistants for USA Summer Camps
Age 18—25 male and female
Must be able to do at least some of the following :
* play a musical instrument
* sing
* play baseball / basketball / volleyball
* swim
Work is offered during the following periods :
June 21—July 20 ;    July 20—August 18 ;    August 18—September 16
Experience preferred .
Write , saying when you can work , and giving phone / Email numbers to :
Holiday Extra , PO BOX 2720 , Denver , Colorado , USA .
你喜欢这种工作，觉得有意思。写信申请这份工作。随信附上你的电话：66776226及电子邮件地址：liming@yeah . net
注：信的开头已给出。字数：100字左右。
Dear Sir or Madam ,
I have read your advertisement for Holiday Camp Assistants and would like to …
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Dear Sir or Madam ,
I have read your advertisement for Holiday Camp Assistants and would like to apply for a job during the period of July 29 to August 18. I am 18 years old. I can play the violin and I like playing volleyball. And I am a good swimmer. Besides, I used to work in a summer training program, teaching the kids swimming and training the school girls' volleyball team. I went on some one-day school trips, during one of which I took a group of students to the seaside where they learnt to swim. I enjoy this kind of work. It's great fun.
You can contact me on the following number or at the address.
Phone: 66776226
Email: liming@yeah.net
I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming

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