Question

【题目】假如你是李华，你计划暑假与父母去纽约进行为期两周的旅游。请你给你在纽约的笔友Tom写一封电子邮件，请求他帮助你解决以下问题：

1.推荐一家旅馆（周边环境；设施）；

2.推荐旅游线路；

3.询间是否可以接机。

注意：

1.词数100左右（邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

提示词：地铁subway

Dear Tom,

I will take a two-week trip to New York with my parents in the summer holiday.

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I'm looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Tom,

I will take a two-week trip to New York with my parents in the summer holiday.I'm writing to ask you to do me a favor.

We'd like you to recommend us a hotel near the subway in order to get around New York more easily.And the hotel with a private kitchen is better because we want to cook meals by ourselves.I addition,please recommend a reasonable tour route so that we can save a lot of time.I know you have been to many places of interest in New York.More importantly,I wonder whether you can pick us up at the airport because we aren't familiar with New York.We'd appreciate it very much if you could help us.

I'm looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】这是一篇提纲类作文，文章要点已经给出，在写这篇文章时要注意以下几点：

1.整篇文章时态以一般现在时为主。

2.要点要齐全，但是不要进行简单的罗列，可以采用适当的连接词，或者是表递进关系的副词如More importantly使上下文衔接自然，行文自然流畅。

3.注意语气，此文是写请求信的英语短文，所以语气上应该比较诚恳，不应该出现过多的强硬语气的词语。

4.此作文要分四个部分写，每个部分要更完整，最好用简单句与复合句结合的方法写作如I wonder whether you can pick us up at the airport because we aren't familiar with New York.

5.多采用一些高级句型，如We'd appreciate it very much if you could help us.

同时使用一些词组如write to,in order to,so that,a lot of,pick up,be familiar with,look forward to等。

【范文亮点】

提纲性文章难点：提纲性文章难点：扩充成句，因为提纲性文章主题内容已经基本列出，在将短句扩充时，要精炼。其中要注意尽量用高级词汇和复杂句是来表达，如强调句，定语从句等，就如文中“ More importantly,I wonder whether you can pick us up at the airport because we aren't familiar with New York.”使用的是定语从句。再者就是要多使用一些高级词汇与词组，如文中write to,in order to,so that,a lot of,pick up,be familiar with,look forward to等。最后就是要段落清新，层次分明。就像文中要多使用一些连接词语使衔接自然。