Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你的澳大利亚朋友Steve对冰雪运动非常感兴趣。请你给他写一封信邀请他今年寒假来参加哈尔滨冰雪节（Harbin International Ice and Snow Festival）。内容包括：

1.写信目的；

2.活动安排；

3.注意事项

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Steve,

Harbin International Ice and Snow Festival will be held in December in Harbin, lasting about a month. Knowing you are interested in snow sports, I feel it would be great if you can join us this winter vacation.

The following are some details about the activity. To begin with, we will watch amazing ice sculptures, which are certain to leave you a deep impression. Besides, we can participate in a lot of events such as snow football matches and skiing. In my opinion, if you try skiing, you should receive training to keep you much safer. Do remember to keep yourself warm with a thick down jacket and socks, as it is very cold here.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邀请信，邀请自己的澳大利亚朋友Steve今年寒假来参加哈尔滨冰雪节。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。

结构：总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：1.写信目的；

2.活动安排；

3.注意事项。

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

Harbin International Ice and Snow Festival；last; be interested in; join; details; ice sculptures; leave sb a deep impression; participate in; snow football matches ; skiing; keep sb safe; down jacket; cold。

第三步：连词成句

Harbin International Ice and Snow Festival will be held in December in Harbin, lasting about a month.

Knowing you are interested in snow sports, I feel it would be great if you can join us this winter vacation.

The following are some details about the activity.

We will watch amazing ice sculptures, which are certain to leave you a deep impression.

We can participate in a lot of events such as snow football matches and skiing.

In my opinion, if you try skiing, you should receive training to keep you much safer.

Do remember to keep yourself warm with a thick down jacket and socks, as it is very cold here.

Looking forward to your reply.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，

第五步：润色修改