Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你最近乘火车旅游了。请你写封邮件，与你的美国朋友Peter分享你的乘火车经历。内容包括：1.网上买票，车站取票； 2.乘车体验：舒适放松，沿途观景； 3.列车上饮食。

注意：1.词数100左右

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯

3.开头语和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Dear Peter,

I’d like to tell you that I had an excellent train ride recently. _________________________________________

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Our possible version:

I’d like to tell you that I had an excellent train ride recently. I had bought my train ticket online ahead of time. It is so convenient for people to buy train tickets now. Before, I got on the train. I picked up my ticket from the machine with my identity card

Sitting on the train, I felt comfortable and relaxed. I enjoyed the scenery outside the window, which made me excited. With the train running fast, the landscapes changed quickly. There is a dining car on the train but the meals are very expensive. So I only ate my own food. I really enjoyed myself during the train trip.

Looking forward to your travel experience.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】试题分析：

本文要求根据提示给美国朋友Peter写封信，分享你本次出游的乘火车经历。成文时应注意以下几点：(1)内容要点齐全，完整描述三方面内容：网上购票，车站取票、乘车体验、列车饮食。 (2)人称使用要恰当。(3)时态：一般过去时为主。(4)适当使用一些连词和插入语，使文章自然、流畅。(5)恰当使用一些高级词汇和句型，以增加文章的档次。根据题目的要求和我们上面提到的注意点，列出提纲：第一部分：出发前网上买票，车站取票；第二段：乘车体验和列车饮食；第三段：结束语。

【亮点说明】

1.使用高级句型：形式主语it的用法It is so convenient for people to buy train tickets now.；现在分词作状语Sitting on the train, I felt comfortable and relaxed.；非限制性定语从句I enjoyed the scenery outside the window, which made me excited.；独立结构With the train running fast, the landscapes changed quickly.等等。2.使用了重要短语：ahead of time提前；get on上车，进行，变老，对付；pick up拿起，捡起，接载，学会；enjoy myself玩的开心；look forward to期待。