Question

12．假如你是李华，请你根据以"老人摔倒你会扶吗？"为主题的班会调查结果及你自已的意见给《英语周报》写一篇演讲稿，要点如下：

调查结果	理由
1.80%的人认为会扶	救人第一
2.15%的人认为不一定会扶	看情况
3.5%的人认为不会扶	不懂急救；怕惹事

注意：
    1．总词数不少于100；2．开头部分已写好，不计入总词数；3．不能使用真实姓名和学校名称．
Ladies and gentlemen，
Will you help the old when he/she falls down on the street？A recent survey from our class meeting shows that______________________________________________
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Answer 1

分析 句型一．A recent survey from our class meeting shows that eighty percent of the students think they are sure to help the old fallen down on the street because saving life is first things 一项最近的调查表明80%的学生认为他们确性要帮组摔倒的老人因为挽救生命是最重要的事情．show的宾语从句"that eighty percent of the students think they are sure to help the old fallen down on the street because saving life is first things"中谓语动词think的宾语从句为"they are sure to help the old fallen down on the street"
句型二．if such a case occurs to us one day when we're old．如果这种事情当我们老了的一天发生在我们身上．when we were old是定语从句修饰先行词one day．

解答 Ladies and gentlemen，
     Will you help the old when he/she falls down on the street？A recent survey from our class meeting shows that eighty percent of the students think they are sure to help the old fallen down on the street because saving life is first things （句型一）．Fifteen percent of the students say whether they help or not depends on the circumstances．However，five percent hold the view that the old shouldn't be helped．（对于表格中的内容进行阐述）
    Why not？First，they lack the knowledge of first aid，not knowing how to deal with the situation．Second，they are afraid of getting into trouble．（分析原因）
    In my opinion，we should help each other，especially the old people．Please remember"respect the old"is one of our best traditions．Everyone will become old，and if such a case occurs to us one day when we're old（句型二），I will say I do need your help．Thank you!（阐明观点）

点评 表格式英语作文一般是在表格中给出一定的内容和情景，要求写一篇120词左右的短文．它属于控制型写作的范畴．历年高考都有此类型的作文，可算是高考作文类型中的"不倒翁"． 本文属于提纲短文，话题为："老人摔倒你会扶吗？"同时这也是一篇议论文，使用第三人称和一般现在时． 首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭．同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，如besides，further，last but not least等．在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性．