Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你和你的留学生朋友Eric约定好下周日一起参加市里举办的中国国画展（the traditional Chinese painting exhibition），但你因故不能赴约．请给他写封邮件，内容包括：

1．表示歉意；

2．解释原因．

注意：

1．词数120左右；

2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．

3．开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数．

Dear Eric，

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Yours sincerely，

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Eric，

I feel terribly sorry that I can't attend the traditional Chinese painting exhibition to be held next Sunday with you. Therefore, I'm writing to apologize to you, wishing you could generously forgive my impolite behavior．

So attracted by traditional Chinese paintings are you that I guess you must be disappointed, for I'm afraid that I will fail to keep your appointment. You know it is the last thing I want to do. Unfortunately, my grandpa caught a serious cold several days ago due to climate change and he is still in hospital now. My family should take care of my grandpa these days, which is our absolute duty and fundamental responsibility. As a consequence, I can't make any excuse to be absent. I sincerely hope that you can understand my situation．

Once again, I am deeply sorry for any inconvenience caused and please accept my sincere apology.

Yours sincerely，

Li Hua

【解析】

达是一篇提纲类写作。要求以李华的名义给留学生朋友Eric写封邮件。

根据题干可知这是一篇书信类作文。写作提要为假定你是李华，你和你的留学生朋友Eric约定好下周日一起参加市里举办的中国国画展（the traditional Chinese painting exhibition），但你因故不能赴约．请给他写封邮件，内容包括：

1． 表示歉意；

2． 解释原因。

我们所要做的就是用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。本作文中给出的要点比较简略，故需要自由发挥的地方较多，解释自己不能赴约的原因，注意语气要诚恳。需要注意不要偏离文章中心。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合整个文章,不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。