Question

阅读下面的短文, 然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

As the college entrance exam is approaching day by day, I suddenly feel nervous and worried．Looking back on the past, I find there are a lot that I haven’t mastered, so I want to make the most of this summer vacation to study and get ready for the exam．My study plan for the summer holiday is as follows:

First of all, I’ll ensure that I have 4 hours a day to review what I’ve studied before and preview new materials in the preparation for next term．Apart from that, I will do some tests to monitor my progress．Besides, I plan to spend an hour every day in doing some sports, I order to keep fit and energetic and help me study more effectively．Moreover, I shall do some community service to cultivate my social skills, broaden my horizons and enrich my social experience．

This plan requires great self-control and perseverance．Anyway, I hope I can stick to my study plan and reach my goal．If I can, I feel like I will be well prepared for the coming college entrance exam and be admitted into a good university．

【写作内容】

1． 以约30个词概括短文的内容；

2． 然后以约120个词就“My Plan for Senior Three”这个主题发表你的看法，并包括以下要点：

（1）我之前是如何准备高考的；

（2）读了这篇文章后，你决定如何调整自己的学习计划；

（3）对实施新计划的期待。

【写作要求】

1．在作文中可以参照阅读材料的内容, 但不得直接引用原文中的句子；

2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

【评分标准】

概括准确, 语言规范, 内容合适, 篇章连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】

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My Plan for Senior Three

To make better use of the summer vocation and prepare for the coming college entrance exam, the writer makes a detailed plan and hopes he can stick to it and reach the goal．

I’m rather impressed with it．And meanwhile, I have to admit that I have never planned as reasonably as he does and I can never keep to my plan．Actually , I just do whatever I feel like doing and afterwards, regret wasting my precious time．

It’s definitely necessary to make a better and more detailed plan and carry it out strictly．Firstly, I need to balance the time for each subject and give extra hours to my weak ones．Then, at the end of every day, tick what has been finished and remove the others to the next day．And finally, there is much point in sparing some time every day for sports because we can achieve almost nothing in bad condition．

I’m determined to fulfill it to the fullest．And hopefully, I can make great progress through my hard work．

【解析】

试题分析：用最简练的文字（30个字左右）把文章的主要内容概括出即可，无须把一些细节，琐碎的内容加上，如描述，举例，一些具体事实等。概括原文的大意不是缩写，不能引用原文的语句，它也不是改写，不能把原句加以变形就完事；主要是概括和抽象，把具体的信息用一些具有高度概括功能的词和句表述出来。与原文某个或某些句子完全一致或大部分一致。有的同学写摘要就从原文的开头部分、中间部分和结尾部分各抄一句，以为这就是“概要”，这种认识是错误的，这样的“概要”是得不了分的。

考点：读写任务。

点评：语言表达要正确。语言结构是学生从一开始学英语一直到以后的学习都伴随的一部份内容，是必须平时扎扎实实要打好的基础。我们除了平时要多记住一些词，短语，句型的用法，还可以在老师把你的作文出现的问题划出后，你自己改正。这是一个更重要，更快捷的提高方法。