Question

该文中共有十处错误,每句中最多有两处,错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（ ＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改十处, 多者（从第11处起） 不计分。
My brother Tom was very selfish when he was a little boy.  He did not want share things with other people.  For example, when he bought a chocolate cake, he put them in a secret place where I couldn’t find .  Then he ate it all by himself.  He never helped other.  He said he is busy.  That is, a game of tennis making him very busy.  He did not care if something he did made people angry.  For instance, on one night he played strong and loudly music till four o’clock in the morning.  But he is difference now.  He often helps grandma with housework, helps mom with cooking and helps his classmate with their lessons.

Answer 1

【小题1】want后加to
【小题2】them 改为it
【小题3】where 改为which/that
【小题4】other 改为 others
【小题5】is改为was
【小题6】making 改为made
【小题7】去on
【小题8】loudly改为loud
【小题9】difference改为different
【小题10】classmate改为classmates

解析试题分析：
【小题1】want to do sth.是固定用法，意思是想做某事。
【小题2】指代a chocolate cake，所以them 改为it。
【小题3】这里含有一个定语从句，且关系词在从句中作宾语，指物，所以用which/that。
【小题4】句意：他从不帮助其他人。所以other 改为 others。
【小题5】这里含有一个宾语从句，主句用一般过去时，从句要使用相应的过去时态。
【小题6】发生在过去的事情，故用一般过去时。
【小题7】一天晚上，直接说one night。
【小题8】用形容词修饰名词。
【小题9】be动词后，用形容词作表语。
【小题10】帮助他的同学，“同学”应该用名词复数。
考点：考查短文改错