Question

【题目】假设你是李华，一名高三学生，在网络上看到一所国外大学的招生( admission)信息，该大学对中国学生开设了30多个专业(major)，你对此非常感兴趣，打算用英语撰写一份个人申请，主要内容包括：

1．想申请的专业；2．个人优势；3．进大学后的设想。

注意：

1．词数：100字左右；2．书信格式已给出；3．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Sir or Madam,

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Yours Sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,

I have recently noticed the admission information of your university on the Internet. I’m writing to applying for management among all the majors offered to us Chinese students.

For one thing, I do well in English and it will be easy for me to complete the courses in your university. For another thing, I have been the monitor during my school schools, which has promoted my organizing ability. Having organized a few school activities successfully, I’m determined to be a manager. Therefore, I intend to join the Students’ Union and participate in some meaningful social activities to gain some advanced management experience if I am admitted to your university.

I’m looking forward to hearing form you.

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】这是一篇提纲类作文。文章内容要点已经给出。考生在写这篇文章时，要注意以下几点：

1.通篇以一般现在时与将来时态为主。

2. 要点要齐全。但是不要对要点进行简单的罗列。可以使用适当的连接词，使上下文行文流畅，衔接自然流程。

3.. 注意语气。既然该文是以申请国外学校为主题，所以要注意语气应该比较恳切。要注意书信的格式问题，言辞要诚恳。

【范文亮点】

文章以“I have recently noticed the admission information of your university on the Internet”引出文章主题，开门见山，为下文做铺垫；“applying for management among all the majors offered to us Chinese students”，句中用offered作后置定语修饰majors；“Having organized a few school activities successfully”，用动名词having做主语。

文中运用了“applying for申请”；“ For one thing…For another thing一方面…另一方面”；“do well in…在…做得好”；“participate in参加”；“am admitted to被录取”等高频词汇。