Question

假设你是李华， 你的美国笔友Peter曾表示希望来中国教书。 你校现需要招聘外教， 请给他写封信，告知招聘信息。内容主要包括：

1. 教授课程：英语口语、英语写作、今日美国、今日英国等

2. 授课对象： 高中生（至少三年英语基础）

3. 工作量：每周12学时，任选三门课；担任学生英语俱乐部或英语校报顾问（advisor）

注意：

1.词数100左右。

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.开头语已为你写好。

Dear Peter,

   I remember you told me you were interested in teaching in China.

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Yours sincerely

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

One possible version:

Dear Peter,

　　I remember you told me you were interested in teaching in China. Our school now is looking for a native-speaker to teach some courses to senior high students. If you come, you can choose three of the following four courses: Speaking, writing, Britain Today and America Today, and teach 12 hours a week. The students who are going to take these courses have at least three years of English learning experience. Besides teaching, you will also work as an advisor to our students’s English club or our school’s English newspaper.

　　Please let me know if you are interested and if you have any other questions, I’d be more than happy to help.

【解析】

试题分析：本文是篇材料作文，材料非常简单，学生很容易把握写作要求和写作目的。考生在写作之前必修认真审题，首先要注意文章的时态，要求让你给笔友写信，因此本文必须用第一人称。再有就是不能根据材料逐字逐句的翻译应该注意句子的衔接，以提高作文的档次。本信涉及的生词不多，根据线索和信函要求，学生容易组织材料。适当的延展个别细节再加上所给的提示，考生注意写清楚以下几点：1.招聘之事，2. 教授课程，3. 授课对象，4. 工作量，5. 恰当的结尾，就能较好的发挥出来。当然在书写上，要干净整洁的卷面与字数要求，一般能达到较高的分数。

【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如be interested in，look for，teach sth to sb., take these courses，at least，work as，还运用了If you come, you can choose three of the following four courses条件状语从句; The students who are going to take these courses have at least three years of English learning experience . who引导的定语从句；I’d be more than happy to help.比较级等等。并注意了句子的衔接如： Besides；now； and 等等。

考点：提纲作文。