Question

最近，李越被评为你们班的“每周之星”。请你根据她的事迹(在上周六下午，不顾天气炎热，为班级选购歌咏比赛服装)，用英语为班级板报写一篇l00一120个词的短文。你的文章应包括下列要点：
1．李越的事迹及其对同学的影响；        2．你的评论。
注意：1．文章的标题和开头已给出(不计词数)。
2．参考词汇： singing contest 歌咏比赛
Costume  服装
Star Student of the Week
Li Yue has been awarded the title of "Star Student of the Week" for what she did for our class.________________________________________________________________________
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Answer 1

Star Student of the Week
Li Yue has been awarded the title of "Star Student of the Week" for what she did for our class. On the hot afternoon of last Saturday, Li Yue went downtown and walked from one store to another, looking for the costumes we would wear in the singing contest. While the rest of us were enjoying our leisure time in cool and comfortable rooms, she spent the whole afternoon searching and selecting. Finally, she found the right clothes. Deeply moved by her efforts, we tried our best and won the first prize in the contest.
Li Yue is always warm-hearted and cares a lot about the class. Besides, she often devotes her spare time to helping others. She has set a good example for us. Therefore, she deserves the honor and we should learn from her.

试题分析：本文是一篇半开放性的作文，是关于每周之星的事迹的。主要的要点已经给出了，1．李越的事迹及其对同学的影响； 2．你的评论。但细节方面需要考生做适当的补充。在写作的时候，要注意使用合适的连接词，让文章更有条理更流畅。同时也要使用高级的词汇和高级的句型，让文章更有档次，更有层次。
点评：半开放性作文的难度较大，要求考生自己根据文章内容梳理要点，然后在整理成文，在写作时要合理运用连接词和高级词汇高级句型，让文章更有层次。