Question

【题目】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国朋友Jim和你都喜欢阅读，最近他在邮件中提出想与和你分享读书心得。请你给Jim回信，向他介绍你喜欢的一本励志的书籍。内容包括：

1.该书的书名；

2.该书的主要内容；

3.该书对你的影响。

注意：1．词数不少于50；

2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Jim,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Jim,

It’s great to hear from you. It’s really a good idea for us to share our favourite books with each other.

My favourite book is A Tree Grows in Brooklyn written by Betty Smith. It tells the story of Francie Nolan, an adolescent girl who grows up in a poor immigrant family in Brooklyn. Her mother favors her little brother, while his father is always drunk. Life is hard for her. However, reading brings her great pleasure. Thanks to the books, she finds a way to endure poverty and loneliness, surviving all the difficulties and challenges.

What I’ve learned from this book is that though life is tough sometimes, as long as we’re determined to rise above difficult circumstances, life can be hopeful and colorful. This book encourages me to keep optimistic about life and gives me courage to face difficulties. It certainly deserves to read.

Looking forward to learning about your favourite book.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本文是提纲类作文，要点已给出，成文时要注意：1.文章主要用第一人称；2.时态：一般现在时为主；3.文章的内容要点要齐全：（1）该书的书名；（2）该书的主要内容；（3）该书对你的影响。4.注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，以提高文章的档次；5.注意使用一些连接词，使得文章表达自然、流畅。6.注意文章的字数控制，50单词左右。

亮点说明：本文是一篇回信，格式正确，衔接紧密，布局合理，使用高级句子。It’s really a good idea for us to share our favourite books with each other. 动词不定式作真正的主语；My favourite book is A Tree Grows in Brooklyn written by Betty Smith.过去分词作后置定语；Her mother favors her little brother, while his father is always drunk. While引导并列句；However, reading brings her great pleasure.动名词作主语；she finds a way to endure poverty and loneliness, surviving all the difficulties and challenges. 现在分词作伴随状语；What I’ve learned from this book is that though life is tough sometimes, as long as we’re determined to rise above difficult circumstances, life can be hopeful and colorful. What引导的主语从句和as long as引导的条件状语从句完美结合；另外，However, Thanks to the books的运用为文章增色添彩。