Question

假设你是李华，请你根据下列要点，用英文给玛丽回一封电子邮件，建议她来你所在的学校作交换生。理由是：1．你校每年都接纳交换生；

2．学校条件好，各种设施好，有图书馆，电子阅览室……；

3．课外活动丰富多彩；   4．你校学生英语水平好，易于交流；

5．特别是老师好，教法生动有趣

注意：

1．可根据要求加以必要发挥，但不要逐字翻译；   2．词数为100左右；

参考词汇：设施：facility  电子阅览室：electro-reading-room

Hi Mary,

Nice to read your e-mail today. It’s very kind of you to give me encouragement, l owe a lot to you for your help.

As to which school is the best one for you to stay in, I should suggest              _____                                                                                 

 

Hope you’ll choose my school.

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Hi Mary,                                                                     

Nice to read your e-mail today. It’s very kind of you to give me encouragement; I owe a lot to you for your help.                                                    

As to which school is the best one for you to stay in, I should recommend my school. The following are the reasons.

First, exchange students are welcomed in my school; besides, we have first-class facilities: the labs, modern libraries and electro-reading-rooms are accessible to all our students, offering us places to broaden our views while on the sports grounds and in gymnasiums we surely can get much fun and make many friends. After-class we have varies of activities which provide us with opportunities to improve ourselves.

And the most important is that we have the best teachers as well as the best schoolmates. The teachers are kind and ready to offer help. In their unique ways of teaching, they often make their class lively and interesting. We students are encouraged to speak English both in and out of class, thus I do believe that you won’t have any difficulty in communicating with us.

Isn’t the information above enough for you to make a decision? If you come to my school, I think I can serve as a good link between you and other students as well as the teachers.        Hope you’ll like my school                                        

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，介绍你校交换生的情况以及你校的一些基本信息。本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。

考点：考查提纲类短文写作

点评：本文属于提纲类作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。