Question

5．2012年CCTV播入的纪录片《舌尖上的中国》（A Bite of China）红遍大江南北．掠过的镜头向我们展现了如此诱人又如此熟悉的家乡味道．请根据以下提示，并结合事例，用英语写一篇短文．
"No matter how far you go，no matter who you become，you will still have a taste for the food you grew up with．"
注意：1．可照抄英语提示语，但不计入总词数；
2．除诗歌外，文体不限；
3．文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；
4．字数为120左右．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇开放式作文，写作时不仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文．需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合给出的开头，不能出现文章脱节问题．
亮点句型一：My grandma would tell us all those amazing ancient stories while making sticky rice cakes in the shape of lovely animals for us．
奶奶会给我们讲那些神奇的古代故事，而我们却以可爱的动物的形状做糯米糕．这是一个省略句，while从句中省略了主语my grandma，和谓语动词中的be动词．
亮点句型二：My uncle，who works at a local restaurant featuring fish specialties，would bring back some of his best dishes back home to share with the family．我的叔叔在当地一家有鱼类特色的餐馆工作，他会带回一些他最好的菜回家和家人分享．本句是一个被限制性定语从句，who指代先行词my uncle．

解答 Recently，the TV program A Bite of China has attracted much attention．Its celebration of the diversity of delicious local food around China reminds me of the food in my hometown．
     Many people complain that life changes too fast．But I believe that there is one thing that never escapes us，the taste for the food we grew up with．I grew up in a family of three generations under one roof．Living together with dozens of your relatives proved to be great fun．My grandma would tell us all those amazing ancient stories while making sticky rice cakes in the shape of lovely animals for us．（亮点句型一）My uncle，who works at a local restaurant featuring fish specialties，would bring back some of his best dishes back home to share with the family．（亮点句型二）I have traveled to other places in China，but never have I tasted better fish than my uncle's．
      In my opinion，A Bite of China is about more than merely food．The program tells people about the real China．As a nation of food lovers，we are drawn to the series by the impressive-looking food，but we are even more impressed by the human interests in it-the love of the food，of our hometowns and of our mother country．

点评 考查开放性作文写作，开放性作文给出了一个话题，并有部分的文字提示．给考生自由发挥的余地较大．对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力．在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭．同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性．