Question

15．身体是革命的本钱，可中学生目前的健康状况让人十分堪忧．家长，学校，专家忧心忡忡．于是有人献良策将体育纳入高考．请结合实际谈谈你的看法，作短文一篇，将其发表．
注意：
1 短文词数不少于100；
2 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
3 文章的开头已给出，不计入总次数．
The fact that high school students are currently experiencing a sharp decline in health has aroused wide concern among parents，schools and experts．
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Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文，让我们就将体育纳入高考这件事．谈谈我们的看法，这需要我们发挥英语思维，将提供的信息用英语完整流畅的表达出来．写作需要用第一人称，时态主要是一般现在时，内容要点包括：身体是革命的本钱，可中学生目前的健康状况让人十分堪忧．家长，学校，专家忧心忡忡．于是有人献良策将体育纳入高考．我们此篇作文分为两部分，第一部分为总体介绍将体育纳入高考这件事．第二部分为我的看法．第三部分为学校应采取的措施．
重点短语与句型：
be  against反对
 by no means 决不
 it is one's responsibility to do sth做某事是某人的职责
provide sth for sb 为某人提供某物
高分句型一：The fact that high school students are currently experiencing a sharp decline in health has aroused wide concern among parents，schools and experts此句用了that引导同位语从句
高分句型二：To have this problem solved，some people propose that PE be included as a subject in the College Entrance Examination．此句用了propose虚拟语气，should 可省略．
高分句型三：Only when one is in good health can he guarantee efficient learning．
                       此句only+介词短语，主句部分倒装

解答 The fact that high school students are currently experiencing a sharp decline in health has aroused wide concern among parents，schools and experts．（ 高分句型一）To have this problem solved，some people propose that PE be included as a subject in the College Entrance Examination..（ 高分句型二）（总体介绍将体育纳入高考这件事）
I'm against the idea because it is by no means practical．Setting up standards for the exam alone may well be a hard task．It is far beyond our ability to manage such a nationwide exam in the sports field．
However，good health is an essential foundation of learning．Only when one is in good health can he guarantee efficient learning．（ 高分句型三）．（我的看法）
Therefore，it is schools'responsibility to help develop their students'awareness of the importance of keeping fit．Moreover，schools should provide sufficient sports facilities for their students to have regular exercise．（学校应采取的措施）

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实 的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．