Question

书面表达（10分）如今手机在中学生当中使用越来越普遍，同学就“校园内是否可以使用手机”进行讨论同学们对此各抒己见. 请你给编辑写一封信，反映讨论情况并谈谈你自己的观点。

赞同	不赞同	你的观点
1. 方便联系	1．学校有公用电话	…
2. 突发事故，可求助	2．玩游戏 ，影响学习
3. 课余可放松自己	3. 浪费时间，金钱

 

注意：1. 开头部分已给出，不计入总词数；2可适当增加细节和连接词，使文章通顺连贯3.词数：100左右

Dear Editor,

Nowadays mobile phones are becoming more and more popular among the middle school students.                                                            

                                                                            

                                                                            

Yours truly,

Wang Lin

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Editor,

Nowadays mobile phones are becoming more and more popular among the middle school students My schoolmates have different opinions. Some think it is convenient to get in touch with others with the cell-phone, which also makes you feel safe especially in time of trouble. Besides, We can relax ourselves by playing them when we’re tired of our studies.

While others think differently. First, the cell-phone in not a must in school, as there are some IC phones there, making it easy to call others. Second, many students often play e -games and send e-massages with their cell-phones, even in class, which will surely have bad effects on their study. Worse is to come, it will result in a great waste of time and money.

In my opinion, the cell-phone is a useful tool in our daily life. But it doesn't mean we can use freely in school. (it’s not wrong to follow the fashion, but the most important thing is how to use the mobile phone in a right way.)

Yours truly,

Wang Lin

【解析】

试题分析：提纲作文要求考生根据所给的写作要求和提纲，确定文章的中心思想，然后紧紧围绕中心思想展开写作。要求考生在保证内容要点全部概括的基础上可以充分发挥自己的想象，进而用自己的语言来表达某种观点或看法，增添了写作的灵活性，同时能较好地考查考生的想象能力和英语语言表达能力。

考点：提纲类作文

点评：写好提纲式作文的关键是认真审题和分析所给的提纲，因此考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示，认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系，然后确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态。根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。