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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文，文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Lang Ping, the head coach of China’s national women’s volleyball team, arrived at my high school in Sep 17. At about 9 o’clock, all the Senior 3 student gathered in the school stadium, waiting for the arrival of Lang Ping and her team. The moment Lang stepped into the stadium, nobody could stay seating. We clapped wild as we saw the schoolmaster take Lang to his seat. Them Lang shares her life with us in her speech. She said it was faith and courage had led her to her success.

As the Senior 3 student, I think it was not only a fortunate experience for me, but also a powerful one, as Lang’s words gave me strength. I will keep it in mind what she told us: Trusting yourself and fight every step of the way to win!

Answer 1

【答案】1. in Sep.17改为on Sep.17

2.student改为 students

3. seating改为seated

4.wild改为wildly

5.his 改为her

6.shares改为shared

7.courage后加that

8 . As后the改为a

9.去掉it

10.trusting改为trust

【解析】本文介绍了郎平去作者学校作演讲的情况以及郎平的话对作者的启发。

考查固定用法。表示“某月某日”，用on，所以in Sep.17改为on Sep.17。

考查名词单复数。表示“所有的高三学生”，是一个复数概念，所以student改为 students。

考查固定用法。Stay seated意思是保持坐着的状态，所以seating改为seated。

考查副词。修饰动词clapped，用副词形式，所以填wild改为wildly。

考查代词。郎平是女的，所以his 改为her。

考查时态。发生在过去的事情，用一般过去时，所以shares改为shared。

考查强调句。这里含有一个强调句，所以courage后加that。

考查冠词。句意“作为一名高三的学生”，泛指“一名高三的学生”，所以As后the改为a。

考查固定用法。keep in mind是固定用法，意思是记住，所以去掉it。

考查祈使句。这是一个祈使句，祈使句用动词原形，所以trusting改为trust。