Question

7．联合国教科文组织就如何处理垃圾污染问题向全世界中学生征文．请以"Saving Our City"为题，写一篇100词左右的短文．
提示：l．城市垃圾的危害：污染环境，对健康有害．
2．你所在的城市是如何处理垃圾的：
（1）垃圾分类；报纸、玻璃的再利用．
（2）填埋有害垃圾；处理废水、废气．
3．如何尽我所能，爱护环境、保护环境．

Answer 1

分析 本文属于应用文写作，根据所给要点以"Saving Our City"为题写一篇征文，写作要点：l．城市垃圾的危害：污染环境，对健康有害．2．你所在的城市是如何处理垃圾的：（1）垃圾分类；报纸、玻璃的再利用．（2）填埋有害垃圾；处理废水、废气．3．如何尽我所能，爱护环境、保护环境．属提纲作文．在写作时人称以第一人称为主．时态以一般现在时为主．
重点词汇：deal with （处理）；otherwise（否则）； pay attention to （注意）；For example（例如）；do one's best to do （尽某人最大的努力去做）；fight against （与…作斗争）．
高分句型：1．If people breathe the polluted air or drink the polluted water，they may get ill．
                  if引导条件状语从句，
                 2．The rest，which is believed to be harmful，is sent to a certain place and buried．
                  which引导一个非限制性定语从句，先行词为The rest，主句The rest is sent to a certain place and buried运用了被动语态．
                 3．Laws have been passed ①to protect the environment，②so waste water should be and is treated before it is poured into rivers．
                  本句运用了被动语态，①不定式短语to protect the environment表示目的，②so引导结果状语从句．

解答 It is very important to deal with the rubbish in cities．Rubbish must be treated properly，otherwise it may cause problems．It may pollute the air and water．If people breathe the polluted air or drink the polluted water，they may get ill（高分句型一）．
Our city has begun to pay attention to the problem．For example，rubbish is sorted．Some rubbish，such as newspapers and glass，is recycled．The rest，which is believed to be harmful，is sent to a certain place and buried（高分句型二）．Laws have been passed to protect the environment，so waste water should be and is treated before it is poured into rivers（高分句型三）．
We've been trying，but there is still a long way to go．We should do our best to fight against pollution．

点评 提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否覆盖了所给要点．写作时注意准确运用时态，使得上下文意思连贯，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，使文章浅显易懂，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．