Question

【题目】假设你是红星中学高一学生李华，你的美国好友Jack在给你的邮件中提到他在选修中国国画，打算在展示课上介绍下面三幅国画中的一幅，希望你能给些建议。请给他回邮件，内容包括：

（1）推荐一幅作品；

（2）介绍该作品内容；

（3）给出推荐理由。

注意：（1）词数不少于50；（2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

提示词：work（作品），dragonfly（蜻蜓），bamboo（竹子）

——Bai Xueshi

——Qi Baishi

——Xu Beihong

Dear Jack,

I’m very happy to know that

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jack,

I’m very happy to know that you are going to introduce a Chinese painting in class and I’m writing to help you.

I suggest that you should introduce the one painted by Xu Beihong. Across the painting, we can see several horses running at high speed like missiles across the sky. To emphasize the horses even more, Xu cleverly drew in black ink to show the moving hair on the horse’s mane and tail. The reason why I recommend it to you is that horse is a typical subject of Xu’s works, which represents energy and success in Chinese culture. It is also a favorite of many art lovers all over the world.

I hope my suggestion can help you. Let me know if you still need help.

Yours,

Li Hua

Dear Jack,

I’m very happy to know that you are going to introduce a Chinese painting in class. As a Chinese folk art lover, I’d like to offer you a hand.

Of the three paintings, I strongly suggest you choose the one painted by Qi Baishi, one of China’s greatest painters. Across the painting, you can see a tiny dragonfly flying towards the bamboo. With its eyes fixed on the bamboo, the tiny insect shows a great interest in the plant.

The reasons why I recommend it to you are as follows. First of all, dragonfly and bamboo are typical of Qi’s works, which, despite its simplicity, shows the harmony of nature. To emphasize the elegance and uprightness of the bamboo, Qi cleverly drew in strong and clear lines with bright color in a creative way. The dragonfly, with its wings spread above the bamboo, is also vividly painted. Another important reason for choosing this painting is that, in Chinese culture, bamboo is a symbol of good virtues and success.

I hope my suggestion can help you. Look forward to your great performance.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

考查应用文中的电子邮件写作。

题目要求假设你是红星中学高一学生李华，你的美国好友Jack在给你的邮件中提到他在选修中国国画，打算在展示课上介绍下面三幅国画中的一幅，希望你能给些建议。请给他回邮件，内容包括：（1）推荐一幅作品；（2）介绍该作品内容；（3）给出推荐理由。分析可知，应该以第一人称为主，一般现在时进行写作。要点已经给出，要求考生根据提纲自己发挥拓展，考生要先想好写哪几点，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。还要用适当的连接词把句子连接起来，这样文章显得更连贯。