Question

请根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文。

Hold fast to dreams, for if dreams die, life is a broken-winged bird that can never fly.

注意：1. 无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；

2. 除诗歌外，文体不限；

3. 文中不得透露个人姓名和班级名称；

4. 词数为120左右。

 

Answer 1

The meaning of life lies in holding fast to dreams. But the changing world seems telling me that people gradually get their dreams lost somehow in the process of growing up, and sometimes I personally find myself saying goodbye unconsciously to those distant childhood dreams.

However, we need dreams. They keep us going; they represent possibility even when we are dragged down by reality. Most successful people are dreams as well as ordinary people who are not afraid to think big and dare to be great. When we were little kids, we all dreamed of doing something big, something significant. Now what we need to do is to keep to them. However, the toughest part is that we often have no idea how to act out all your fantasies. Well, just start with concrete goals and stick to it. Don’t let the nameless fear confuse the eye and defeat our strong belief of future. Through our talents, through our intelligence, through our efforts and through our creativity, we will make it.

Hold fast to dreams, for when dreams go, life is a barren field frozen with snow. So my dear friends, think of your old and maybe dead dreams. Whatever it is, pick it up and make it alive from today.

【解析】

试题分析：考查开放性作文写作,开放性作文给出了一个话题，并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，如besides, further, last but not least等。在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。

【亮点说明】文章使用了很好的短语和句子：lie in 在于， in the process of 在…过程中，dreamed of梦想，stick to坚持，make it成功， Most successful people are dreams as well as ordinary people who are not afraid to think big and dare to be great. 这句话用了定语从句， Now what we need to do is to keep to them. 这句话用了主语从句，However, the toughest part is that we often have no idea how to act out all your fantasies. 这句话用了表语从句， Whatever it is, pick it up and make it alive from today.这句话用了让步状语从句。总之，范文使用大量高中教材中出现的高级短语和句型，考生应该能做到学以致用。

考点：考查开放式作文