Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I’m terribly sorry to make you disappointed for not having finished my homework in time. As matter of fact, I had something else to do, that made me have no time for my homework.

My father was serious injured in a car accident yesterday. Hearing the news, I hurry to the hospital after school. I had a busy night, but I didn’t do my homework.

As what you know, I am an ordinary student in class and want to improve your English. I find I have great difficult in paying attention to my study. Would you please give me some suggestion? Besides, I wish you could give me more chances to practice my English in class.

I’m looking forward to hear from you soon.

Answer 1

【答案】1. as ∧ a matter

2. that which

3. serious seriously

4. hurry hurried

5. but so

6. what 删除

7. yourmy

8. difficultdifficulty

9. suggestionsuggestions

10. hearhearing

【解析】

这是一篇记叙文。文章以书信形式叙述了“我”因为父亲昨天遇到车祸，没能及时完成老师布置的作业而向老师写的道歉信。同事提到自己在英语学习方面有困难，希望老师给予一些学习的建议。

1.考查固定搭配。句意：事实上，我有其他的事要做。固定搭配:as a matter of fact“事实上”，故：应在matter之前加上冠词a。

2. 考查非限制性定语从句的关系代词。句意：我有其他事要做，这使得我没有时间完成作业。逗号之前为完整的句子，所以逗号后面为非限制性定语从句。根据非限制性定语从句的知识可知。关系代词不用that，由于其在从句中做主语，故要把that变成which。

3.考查副词。句意：我父亲昨天在一场车祸中受了重伤。结合词汇知识，injure为动词,修饰动词要用副词。故serious变成seriously

4.考查时态。句意：放学后，我匆忙赶到医院。结合语境，讲述了昨天的事实，所以，时态上要用一般过去时。故：hurry变成hurried。

5.考查连词。句意：我昨晚很忙，所以我没做作业。结合语境逻辑，因为忙，所以没做完作业。不表示转折。故：but变为so。

6.考查固定用法。句意：正如你所知道的那样。固定搭配：as you know, 故：what删掉。

7.考查代词。句意：在课堂上，我是一个普通的学生，我想要提高我的英语。在逻辑上，我要提高的是我的英语。故your变成my。

8.考查固定搭配。句意：我发现我很难集中精力学习。搭配：have difficulty (in)doing …“做……有困难”，故：difficult变成difficulty。

9.考查可数名词。句意：你能给我一些建议吗？句中用到了suggestion,其为可数名词，因为前面有some,所以要用复数。故：suggestion变suggestions。

10.考查固定搭配。句意：我期待着快点收到你的来信。固定搭配：look forward to doing sth.“期待做……。”故：hear变为hearing。