Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你的外国笔友Sally想利用假期参加一些夏令营活动，写信征求你的意见。请结合自身经历，给她回一封邮件，告诉她参加夏令营的好处。

注意：1. 词数100左右 (开头和结合已给出，但不计入总词数)；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Sally,

I'm writing to tell you about my ideas about taking part in various camp activities.

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sally

I'm writing to tell you about my ideas about taking part in various camp activities.

In my opinion, it is beneficial for us. Take myself as an example. I took part in an International English Summer Camp last year. For one thing, I made a lot of friends from different parts of the world, through whom I learned more about different cultures. For another thing, the activities including English corner, English drama plays and the like also changed me a lot. There is no doubt that all these activities can not only help us learn more skills but improve our English.

So, why not join them? Wish you a nice holiday.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本文书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封电子邮件。

第1步：根据提示可知，本篇是一篇电子邮件：假定你是李华，你的外国笔友Sally想利用假期参加一些夏令营活动，写信征求你的意见。请结合自身经历，给她回一封邮件，告诉她参加夏令营的好处。

第2步：根据写作要求确定关键词，如：taking part in various camp activities.（参加各种各样的露营活动）；beneficial for us（对我们是好的）；International English Summer Camp（国际英语夏令营）；including English corner（包括英语角）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态语态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。