Question

在学校，对于我们学生来说，与老师建立良好的关系非常重要。请就“师生关系”这一主题用英语写一篇120词左右的短文，谈谈你的看法，内容包括：
1. 良好的师生关系的重要性；
2. 怎样培养良好的师生关系。
注意：可适当发展，以使行文连贯。

Answer 1

Good relationships between our teachers and us play an important part in our study and life. Only with good relationships can our teachers achieve the desired teaching effect, and can we do well in our studies.
This ideal relationship depends on mutual effort. One the one hand, we should respect our teachers and their efforts paid to us. We should be ready to follow their practical advice. On the other hand, our teachers should not only be kind, friendly and patient to us, but also treat each student fairly and equally. They must be responsible for their teaching and ready to help us when we are in trouble. In a word, if teachers and we are willing to do their best, the relationship between us will be quite beneficial.

解析试题分析：作文为一篇材料作文，就内容来讲包括两个方面的问题，一是良好的师生关系的重要性，对我们，对老师有什么作用。二是培养良好的师生关系的方式，有哪些方法来培养良好的师生关系。所以重要性所占比重要少于建立师生关系的方法。主次要分明。
【亮点说明】我们可以借鉴文章的好的方面，一是文章的开篇点题，紧扣中心，就内容而言，主次得当。第二方面是句式变换丰富，文中使用了较复杂的句型结构，使文章语言丰富，例如Only with good relationships can our teachers achieve the desired teaching effect, and can we do well in our studies. 倒装句的使用以及not only---but also ----复杂的结构。
考点: 考查学生语言的综合运用能力