Question

由于观点和立场的不同,孩子与父母之间时常存在一些矛盾和问题,某英文报社正在就“如何改善孩子与父母之间的关系”这一主题征稿,请你写一篇英语短文,发表自己的观点和看法。 
要点如下:
1. 存在问题:
孩子:不信任父母,不愿意与父母交流；经常对父母发脾气……
父母:处理问题的方式简单,把自己的想法强加(impose . . . . . . on)给孩子……
2. 解决办法:
孩子:多和父母沟通；尊敬父母,多体谅父母……
父母:多和孩子相处,耐心听取他们的想法…… 
注意:可适当增加细节；词数:120左右

Answer 1

A good parent-child relationship is expected, but there are often problems.
As for children, they don’t trust their parents and are unwilling to communicate with them. Some children lose their temper easily because of the study burden, while some parents tend to neglect their children’s ideas and try to impose their own ideas on them.
How can these problems be solved? In my opinion, children should be considerate and respect their parents. When they disagree with their parents, they should tell them. On the other hand, parents should learn to listen to their children’s ideas instead of deciding everything for them. In this way, a good parent-child relationship can be established.

本文的主题的如何改善孩子与父母之间的关系，与考生的生活实际非常贴切，有很强的可写性，正因为是熟悉的事情，所以考生有话可说。本文的要点基本上都已经给出，只需要按照适当的顺序组织成英文即可。在写作的时候注意使用合适的连接词和高级的词汇，让文章更流畅，同时也要使用2-3个高级的句型如强调句，倒装句让文章更有档次。