Question

【题目】假如你是高三的学生李华，你的表弟王强即将要参加高考，在考前的100天，请你结合自己的学习生活，用英语给表弟写一封建议信。要点包括：

1.努力学历

2.调整心态

3.锻炼身体

4.其他方面

注意：

1.字数100字左右。

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

3.开头和结尾以为你写好，不计入总词数。

Dear Wang Qiang，

How are you doing recently?

Yours

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Wang Qiang，

How are you doing recently?

I'm writing to give you some suggestions on study and life. For Senior 3 students,

time is precious. It is high time we took effective measures to live our life to the

fullest.

First of all, I highly propose we make the most of the time in class, following our

teachers. Besides, we tend to get anxious with time going by. Take it easy. It's OK. More importantly, just as an old saying goes, “Health is Wealth”. That's why we have to spend some time exercising regularly. Tired as we feel, we are lucky and happy with so many teachers, friends, and our parents standing behind us. We may ask them for help whenever we need it.

I hope we will graduate from high school without regrets and be admitted to our ideal universities.

Wish you success!

Yours，

Li_Hua

【解析】

试题分析：假如你是高三的学生李华，你的表弟王强即将要参加高考，在考前的100天，请你结合自己的学习生活，用英语给表弟写一封建议信。要点包括：1.努力学历2.调整心态3.锻炼身体4.其他方面。写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。注意：

1.字数100字左右。2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3.开头和结尾以为你写好，不计入总词数。

【亮点说明】本文内容齐全，结构严谨，层次分明，布局合理，语言精练，同时运用高级句子。

宾语从句和现在分词作状语的同时使用：I highly propose we make the most of the time in class, following our teachers.表语从句的使用：That's why we have to spend some time exercising regularly。倒装句的使用：Tired as we feel, we are lucky and happy with so many teachers, friends, and our parents standing behind us.连接词的使用使得文章的结构更加清晰。First of all, Besides, More importantly。