Question

假如你是刘宁，本学期刚转学到另一个城市，不适应新环境，想给好朋友宋薇写一封邮件，要点如下：
1．询问近况，表达思念；
2．不习惯饮食和天气；
3．听课有困难；
4．没有朋友，感到孤独。
注意：
1．词数120左右。
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Song Wei,
                                                                                 
                                                                                   
                                                                                 
                                                                                   
                                                                                   
                                                                                  
                                                                                   
                                                                                 
                                                                                  
                                                                                  
                                                                                   
Yours sincerely,
Liu Ning

Answer 1

不唯一
Dear Song Wei,
I haven’t heard from you for a long time. How is everything going with you? I have been missing you since I got to this strange city.
To be honest, I am not used to the food here and the weather always makes me feel uncomfortable. For that reason, I find it difficult to concentrate on my studies. The new teachers are friendly but they speak too fast and with a certain accent that I cannot quite understand. This often discourages me in class. What’s worse, I always feel lonely after school since I don’t have good friends here. I really want to go back to my previous school, studying with you and playing together.
I’m very worried. Can you give me some help and good suggestions? I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Liu Ning

试题分析：本文属于应用文，它是一封电子邮件。格式已经给出，可以直接进入正文的要点表达，但是不要拘泥于要点的表达，应该适当增加细节以使行文连贯，比如适当选用表示因果、递进、转折关系的连接词语等。考生应注意层次结构及动词的时态要准确到位。这里说的是现在的状况，一般情况下，应该用一般现在时。
点评：考生不能遗漏要点要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，尽可能的使用较复杂的句子结构，尽量使用高级词汇以便得到较高的分数。考生注意使用过渡词或者过渡句来使文章读起来比较流畅。动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作练习以外，还可以适当背诵一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。