Question

【题目】请以Is Failure a Bad Thing?为题写一篇120个词左右的英语作文。内容包括：

1. 失败是常有的事。

2. 人们对失败有各种态度。

3. 我对失败的态度。

Is Failure a Bad Thing?

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Answer 1

【答案】

Is Failure a Bad Thing?

Failure is not a stranger to life. It can happen anywhere, anytime and to anyone. No person succeeds all the time. The more development you want to make, the more failure you might come across. So, people are faced with failure now and then.

There are different attitudes towards failure. Some people are afraid of failure and they can not bear the blow of failure, so they stay where they are and try to not to make progress. Some optimists, however, fight against failure bravely and achieve all his aims at last.

My attitude is that we should not be afraid of failure. When we meet with failure, we don’t lose heart. We should call up all our courage and carry on what we are determined to do. Remember the proverb “Where there is a will, there is a way”.

【解析】

试题分析：本篇文章是一个提纲式作文，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。2、确定文章的总体框架，要在试题给出的立场的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态。 4.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。

【亮点说明】本用了多样词组 3.文章行文结构严密，能够结合自己的看法，具有现实意义 4.逻辑鲜明，思路清晰。在考场文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。1.本文文法简单流畅，不拖泥带说，句式多样。 2.使上可谓一篇高分佳作。