Question

假设你是李华，在出国交流学习期间，到当地一家电影院看了一场精彩的电影，但在观影过程中发现了一些问题。请你根据下列提示用英语给影院经理写一封信。

1．因广告过多，影片放映晚点；2．影片播放音量过大；3．安全出口标识不明，存在安全隐患；

4．适当结尾。

注意：1．词数：100～120； 2．可适当加入细节，以使行文连贯； 3．信的开头已为你写好(不计入词数)。

参考词汇：安全出口—exit 安全隐患—potential safety hazard

Dear Manager,

I’m an exchange student from China. Yesterday, I went to your cinema to see a film. The film was very good, but……

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

Dear Manager,

I’m an exchange student from China. Yesterday I went to your cinema to see a film. The film was very good, but I did not enjoy it because there were some problems in the cinema.

First, the film was delayed as there were so many advertisements at the beginning. It was rather annoying. Secondly, the sound of the film was so loud that I could hardly hear it. Third, the EXIT signs could not be seen clearly, which presented potential safety hazards. And if something terrible should happen, it would be difficult for people to get out quickly.

As a visitor to your city, I’m disappointed with my experience in your cinema. I’m writing the letter in the hope that you can consider these problems and make some improvements.

Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文。假设你是李华，在出国交流学习期间，到当地一家电影院看了一场精彩的电影，但在观影过程中发现了一些问题。请你根据下列提示用英语给影院经理写一封信。1．因广告过多，影片放映晚点；2．影片播放音量过大；3．安全出口标识不明，存在安全隐患；4．适当结尾。需要写的内容已经粗略给出，需要我们翻译成完整通顺的句子，适当添加些内容，使文章更充实。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型为文章润色。注意要求的词数100～120词左右，不要太多也不要太少。

【亮点说明】The film was very good, but I did not enjoy it because there were some problems in the cinema.

这里含有一个原因状语从句；Third, the EXIT signs could not be seen clearly, which presented potential safety hazards.这里含有一个非限制性定语从句。

考点：提纲类书面表达