Question

【题目】假设你叫李华，即将高中毕业，你的美国笔友Tom来信询问你的情况。请根据以下要点用英文写信回复。

内容包括：

1、学习和生活情况。

2、高考后的打算。

注意: 1. 词数100左右；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

提示：高考：College Entrance Examination

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Tom,

I’m very glad to receive your letter. Now let me tell you something about my study and school life.

As a senior three student, I am very busy in preparing College Entrance Examination, which is around the corner. We have four classes in the morning and three in the afternoon. Usually I can’t go to bed until midnight, which makes me feel a little tired in the next day’s class.

I want to be an English interpreter after I have graduated from the college. As everyone knows, whoever receives good education may get a good position in the future, and will lead to success. Therefore, I am working hard to make my dream come true.

How about yours? Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本文是提纲类写作，要点已给出。写作时可联系自身情况适当增加细节，同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。

【亮点说明】本文是一篇书信，格式正确，语言简练，要点明确，句中使用高级句子。As a senior three student, I am very busy in preparing College Entrance Examination, which is around the corner.非限制性定语从句用在句中；I want to be an English interpreter after I have graduated from the college.时间状语从句在句中体现；As everyone knows, whoever receives good education may get a good position in the future, and will lead to success. As引导的非限制性定语从句和主语从句完美结合；Therefore, I am working hard to make my dream come true.动词不定式作目的状语甚是经典。