Question

【题目】假定你是学生会主席李华，你校将于下周组织学生前往澳门一所兄弟学校参加中秋节庆祝活动，请给对中国传统文化感兴趣的外教Stephen写封邮件，邀请他一同前往。内容包括：

1.出发时间：10月5号早上9点；目的地：澳门（简要介绍）；

2.介绍中秋节以及本次活动内容：放烟花、吃月饼、赏月等各种中秋传统活动；

3.要求：准备一份小礼物。

注意：

1.词数100左右；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Stephen,

With the Mid-Autumn Festival approaching, we're going to participate in a celebration held by one of our brother schools in Macao. On behalf of the Student Union, I’m writing to invite you to join us.

We will set out for Macao at 9:00 am on Oct. 5lh. Our destination, Macao, which lies to the south of Guangdong province, is a clean and beautiful city famous for its gambling. Due to the convenient transportation, it will only take us three hours to get there. As one of your students, I know you are interested in oriental culture. The annual festival is one of the most important cultural events, which has been enjoying great popularity in our country. So it will be a precious opportunity to kindle your passion. During that day, there will be many traditional Chinese activities. Not only will we enjoy a large meal, but we will also fireworks, having fun with each other. Additionally, with the beautiful moon up in the sky, we will also sit together admiring it and eating moon cakes, a symbol of fullness and family togetherness.

By the way, remember to prepare a gift for the students of our brother school. We’re looking forward to your participation.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】本文属于提纲类作文，要求假定你是学生会主席李华，你校将于下周组织学生前往澳门一所兄弟学校参加中秋节庆祝活动，请给对中国传统文化感兴趣的外教Stephen写封邮件，邀请他一同前往。要点：1.出发时间：10月5号早上9点；目的地：澳门（简要介绍）；2.介绍中秋节以及本次活动内容：放烟花、吃月饼、赏月等各种中秋传统活动；

3.要求：准备一份小礼物。这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合给出的开头，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。

【亮点说明】本篇书面表达要点全面，结构紧凑，是一篇较好的范文。这篇短文使用了大量的短语，为文章增色不少，如:participate in参加，On behalf of代表。还使用了定语从句Our destination, Macao, which lies to the south of Guangdong province, is a clean and beautiful city famous for its gambling.和宾语从句As one of your students, I know you are interested in oriental culture.等多种句式结构，增加了文章的可读性。