Question

下面这幅照片展现了志愿者慈善义卖活动（Charity Bazaar）的情景。请根据你对照片的理解用英语写一篇短文。你的短文应该包括以下内容：

1．简述照片内容，如情景、人物、动作等等；
2．结合自身实际，谈谈你的感想；
3．举例说明你能为公益事业做点什么，并陈述原因。
Your help will make a difference!
注意：
1．可参照图片下面的文字及文章开头所给提示，作必要的发挥想象。
2．词数150左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数。
3．作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。
Volunteers in high schools help our society in many ways. They devote their time and effort to help people in need.

Answer 1

Volunteers in high schools help our society in many ways. They devote their time and effort to help people in need.
The picture above illustrates a common scene that can be seen in many campuses, where volunteers hold charity bazaars to collect money for the needed. They put their books, toys or even music players on desks for sale. These stalls can always attract large numbers of students, who buy the things not just out of love of the items, but also out of their loving hearts.
This picture reminds me of children in remote areas who cannot attend school because of poverty, and of senior citizens in nursing houses who need better care. It is everyone’s responsibility to help make the world a better place to live in.
Like the volunteers in the picture, I also have a willing heart to help people. I have every hope to visit the house for orphans, to donate my money to those who are in need and most importantly, to help the people around me whenever necessary.（154）

试题分析：这是一篇看图作文，谈论的是志愿者慈善义卖活动。除了说明图画内容，还要结合自身实际，谈谈你的感想，并举例说明你能为公益事业做点什么，并陈述原因。写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合给出的开头，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【亮点说明】The picture above illustrates a common scene that can be seen in many campuses, where volunteers hold charity bazaars to collect money for the needed. 这句话里面有两个定语从句， These stalls can always attract large numbers of students, who buy the things not just out of love of the items, but also out of their loving hearts.这句话有定语从句也有not only…，but also…这个词组， It is everyone’s responsibility to help make the world a better place to live in. 这句话里面有it做形式主语， I have every hope to visit the house for orphans, to donate my money to those who are in need and most importantly, to help the people around me whenever necessary.这句话里面有不定式还有状语从句的省略式。