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【题目】目前，我国假期选择出国旅游的人越来越多，请你以Travelling Abroad为题，用英语写一篇词数在120左右的短文，要点如下：

1.出境游热的原因；2.旅游中出现了一些不文明现象，如随地吐痰、乱扔垃圾等；3.你的态度和看法。

注意：1可适当增加细节以使行文连贯； 2参考词汇：树立形象：uphold an image

At present, more and more people choose to travel abroad when they have holidays.

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【答案】One possible version：

At present, more and more people choose to travel abroad when they have holidays. The reasons are obvious. With the development of people’s living standard and economy，they can afford to go abroad. Besides, more people are becoming interested in foreign cultures，therefore they are eager to visit different countries for themselves.

However, some people behave very badly in foreign countries. For example, they drop litter everywhere, as well as spit freely in public, which not only shows bad personal qualities , but also does great harm to the image of our country。

It’s well known that China is an ancient civilized country with a long history. The country’s prosperity enables us to travel abroad. I think we should always bear in mind that it is everyone’s responsibility to uphold the image of our motherland while traveling abroad.

【解析】试题分析：本文要求以Travelling Abroad为题，用英语写一篇词数在120左右的短文，要点如下：出境游热的原因；旅游中出现了一些不文明现象，如随地吐痰、乱扔垃圾等；你的态度和看法。根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来。写作时注意时态、语态的合理运用，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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