Question

【题目】假定你是李华。你的英国外教Mr. Green非常喜欢中国民间音乐。请你给他写一封电子邮件，邀请他参加你校组织的师生民乐演奏会，内容包括：

1. 提出邀请；

2. 演奏会时间、地点、活动安排等；

3. 表示期待。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 可能用到的词汇：民乐演奏会 Folk Music Concert

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mr. Green,

There will be a Chinese Folk Music Concert in our school with the aim of enriching our school life. Knowing that you are interested in Chinese folk music, I’d like to invite you to attend it.

The concert is to be held at 7: 00 pm. this Sunday in the lecture hall of our school, which features a lot of traditional Chinese folk music works. Some teachers and students will play many beautiful music pieces using traditional instruments such as Erhu, Pipa, Guzheng and so on. I’m sure they will give you a very impressive concert, through which you will learn more about Chinese folk music.

Looking forward to your coming.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求给英国外教Mr. Green写一封邮件，邀请他参加你校组织的师生民乐演奏会。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。

结构：总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：1. 提出邀请；

2. 演奏会时间、地点、活动安排等；

3. 表示期待。

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

a Chinese Folk Music Concert; invite sb to do; attend; hold; the lecture hall; traditional instruments; impressive; learn more about; look forward to。

第三步：连词成句

1. There will be a Chinese Folk Music Concert in our school with the aim of enriching our school life.

2. Knowing that you are interested in Chinese folk music, I’d like to invite you to attend it.

3. The concert is to be held at 7: 00 pm. this Sunday。

4. The concert is to be held in the lecture hall of our school， which features a lot of traditional Chinese folk music works.

4. Some teachers and students will play many beautiful music pieces using traditional instruments。

5. I’m sure they will give you a very impressive concert, through which you will learn more about Chinese folk music.

6. Looking forward to your coming.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，

第五步：润色修改