Question

【题目】阅读下面短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

It was 7:30 in the morning. As usual I was on the subway to school. It was so crowded with people that it felt like the air conditioner wasn't working. I was standing there looking around. Then, I saw an old lady get on the train with a 7-year-old child who seemed to be her grandson.

A warm-hearted gentleman generously offered his seat to the old lady. Instead of sitting down herself, however, the old lady called her grandson over and told him to sit.

Sooner or later, children mature and step into the complicated world. Love is necessary in the early development of children, yet, to the disappointment of many, too much love definitely prevents children from learning the rules of the real world. Teaching the child about the rules of society within the family helps the child to achieve success later. By giving up seats to their children, grandparents may destroy kids' best chance for character development.

[写作内容]

1. 以约30个词概括上文的主要内容。

2. 以约120个词谈谈你对长辈溺爱孩子的看法，内容包括：

(1)描述长辈溺爱孩子的表现。(2)溺爱孩子的后果。(3)你对长辈溺爱孩子的看法。

[写作要求]

1. 作文中可以用亲身经历或虚构的故事。2. 不得直接引用原文中的句子。3. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

Answer 1

【答案】

This passage mainly talks about the importance of character development of children by giving an example of an old lady who gives up the seat offered by a gentleman to her grandchild.

It is common in our country that parents or grandparents often spoil the kids. For example, parents or grandparents will buy shoes of famous brands to satisfy their needs, no matter how expensive they are. What is worse, they provide kids with whatever they want and ask them to do nothing in return.

When these spoiled children grow up, many of them may greatly disappoint their parents. Some of them even commit crimes. If it happens, who is to blame? I think parents or grandparents are not supposed to spoil kids. Kids should go through hardships or do what they can to help parents or other people. Only by doing so can they be independent and responsible.

【解析】

试题分析：本文是一篇议论文。给出短文和作文要求，根据所给的短文写出概要，这给考生提供了比较明确的背景和可参考的依据。考生需要发挥想象、展开思维，把文章内容写的具体、鲜活并且要有说服力。成文时要注意：文章的内容要点要齐全；要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，以提高文章的档次；注意使用一些连接词，使得文章表达自然、流畅；注意文章的字数控制，150单词左右；不能使用原文语句。

【亮点说明】本文采用三段式，结构严谨，衔接紧密，运用高级句子。by giving an example of an old lady who gives up the seat offered by a gentleman to her grandchild. Who引导定语从句；It is common in our country that parents or grandparents often spoil the kids. For example, parents or grandparents will buy shoes of famous brands to satisfy their needs, no matter how expensive they are. it是形式主语，that引导真正的主语从句；they provide kids with whatever they want and ask them to do nothing in return. Whatever引导宾语从句；When these spoiled children grow up, many of them may greatly disappoint their parents. When引导时间状语从句；Only by doing so can they be independent and responsible.部分倒装的运用堪称经典。