Question

【题目】短文改错

Dear Tracy，

Although I'm 16 years old，but my father still treats me as a careless children. He doesn’t value my opinions .He is very strict with me and often punishes me about leaving things lying around in the house while he did this all time. I think he fails to set an example to me to follow. But he often say：“Do as I say，not as I doing.” Even worse，he points out my past mistakes to our guests, making me feel hurting. I love my father, but I can’t bear what he does. I have been tried many times to talk with he, but he never listens. Please help me.

Puzzled

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】去掉but

【2】children—child

【3】about—for

【4】did---does

【5】all后加the

【6】say—says

【7】doing—do

【8】huting—hurt

【9】去掉been

【10】he--him

【解析】

试题分析：一个16岁的孩子不知道如何和严厉的父亲沟通，写信向Tracy求助。

【1】去掉but Although引导让步状语从句，但不能和but连用。故去掉but。

【2】children—child 句意：一个粗心的孩子。可知名词用单数形式，故把children—child。

【3】about—for 固定搭配：punish---for---，因---而惩罚。故把about—for。

【4】did---does 句意：他对我严格要求，经常因为我把东西扔在地板上惩罚我，而他却一直这样做。根据句意可知此处应该用一般现在时态，故把did---does。

【5】all后加the 固定词组：all the time一直，总是。故在all后加the。

【6】say—says 句意：但是他经常说。根据整篇文章可知句子用一般现在时态，句子主语是“he”，故把say—says。

【7】doing—do 句子用一般现在时态，句子缺少谓语，故把doing—do。

【8】hurting—hurt 句意：使我感到受伤。feel hurt感到受伤，故把hurting—hurt。

【9】去掉been 句意：我尝试了很多次和他谈话。此处是主动形式，故去掉been。

【10】he--him 介词后面用代词的宾格形式，故把he—him。

【知识拓展】

在同一句中although/though/while/despite/in spite of不能和but连用；repeat不能和again连用；return不能和back连用；enter不能和into连用；because不能和so连用。